She says ought I to get a little more serious, do some reading of other peoples' writing on nature.
SO: Tim Dee The Running Sky
and a great quote about gannets (not that I have seen any but she says it is a very good description...)
“the rapid origami of themselves and their brilliant white match strikes” ”it was impossible to hear them break through the sea…but the splash they make looks exactly like a sound and I found myself adding it to the ruckus!”
“mind wiping swirl of birds”